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Disconnected.

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I'm feeling so strange today.

The cold, wind slowly traced its icy fingertips down my spine, making me wish he was here with me...

What is this? I stare off blankly, watching myself cross my legs, my feet try to shake some warmth into them and my nails clench...I watch it all just like a stranger would.

Then I saw him off in the distance shining that big warm grin over at me even in this awful weather and suddenly the cold didn't seem so bad. "What's wrong?" He asked curiously as he finally reached me, grabbing me up in his two warm arms.

What's wrong? The thought ran through my mind slowly....nothing; nothing's wrong......or not now atleast.

I pressed my face farther into the crook of his neck, daring to press my frozen lips to his bare flesh and giggled softly as I felt his whole body tremble. "I've just been feeling so strange lately cause I've been missing something really important sweetie....but it's back now so it's okay." Even though I couldn't see his face, I just knew the huge beautiful smile that had to be spreading across it as he whispered sweetly in my ear.

                                      "You know....I've been feeling the exact same way"
"I feel so disconnected without you...."

-I.
--HATE.
---COLD.
----WEATHER.

Don't get me wrong, snow can be fun and beautiful for pictures but as for this 20 degree weather with nothing but frozen windows and red noses....all I can say is "SUMMER 2011 ALL DAAA WAY" ;p

and hmm...I'm in the strangest mood right now so I have no clue if this is worth posting or not :shrug:
© 2010 - 2024 Lil-Christa
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Kira73's avatar
I really enjoyed this. Love is never perfect. Sometimes it just is.

Not sure how much crit you're looking for, but I will poke you about those ellipses. Three dots. Anymore's a crowd. :)

Thanks for subbing this to TWM. :hug:

KM